Small Towns Big City

Costumes communicate disclose Different Personalities Pulling up in the parking lot on that point ar microscopic groups of mountain crowded around getting out of their cars and preparing to enter the building, there is laughter and talking passim the parking lot leading up to the building. Every hotshot is dressed in enclothes for the fore of the company there argon mummies, zombies, cartoon characters, fairies, devils, musicians, super Heroes, cowboys and cowgirls, and many more. Everyone wearing a costume seems to present a more extrovert and somewhat false individualality relevant to the character or thing that their costume is portraying.As we walk impendent to the entrance from the parking lot you can hear the music, and the noise of the people inside. The music is loud and draws a crowd towards the entrances. When we arrive at the entrance to the building there is a lady about five feet five inches tall with light brown shoulder length hair wearing a cowgirl out fit, stand up behind a booth, checking Identification to ensure everyone who enters is at least twenty one years of age, and withal collecting the entrance fee from each person. Shes talking with a fake country underscore that helps add character to her costume.Her personality is bubbly and welcoming it sets the tone for what the atmosphere is inside the building. There is some other person at the entrance, a man standing beside her he is tall about six metrical foot five or so, he has short brown hair and is wearing a uniform habilitate instead of a costume. His personality is more calm and natural I feel that this is because he is non in a costume so he doesnt have the same ramp up as the others who are in costume have. He checks everyones bags for weapons, alcoholic beverage, and anything that would non be permitted inside the building.He therefore places a paper bracelet around each person wrist to identify that they have been analyse through security, and are permitte d to enter the building, this also helps the bartenders identify that the person they might be serving alcohol to have been verified as over the age of twenty one. When we walk in the campaign introduction the noise of laughing, talking and the music has gotten untold louder, it is now surface what the atmosphere in the building is, there are people everywhere, talking, drinking, and having a good time, it seems entertainment and relax, entertainment is everywhere.No matter what direction you work on there are so many different smells, save with the huge crowed of people the smashedest of all the smells would by utmost be the body odor. Straight ahead as short as you walk in the door there is a bar where a bar tendered dressed in a devil costume stands taking orders and making drinks, she seems busy and more mute then the rest of the employees, but every one time in awhile she will scowl in a fun way at person in character to her costume.There is a large line of people s urrounding the bar waiting for their turn they are all laughing and some are even in a elfish irritation using props to their costumes as weapons to battle with each other. To the odd is a long table of people, a dance floor, and a DJ station. Looking to the right there is more small grouped tables, restrooms, and a door to an outside area where people are smoking and talking. There is a group of people standing outside dressed as the ghost buster crew, they are all acting out scenes from the movie, they are sure to stay in full character through the entire scene.Their enthusiasm is socialize to say the least, and it draws a crowd of people. Others jumpstart to join their lead, there is a small group of pirates that are also sward fighting and talking in accents that suggest their characters. The outside atmosphere is more playful then inside and is also a little quieter. boilers suit everyone is having a good time and the theme of the party is in honor of the holiday Hallowee n.There is costume contest that everyone was encouraged to enter, it seems to ramp up the ardour throughout the building, everyone begins to gather around the stage. They had everyone who entered the costume contest line up on stage one by one. The costumes were judged by the crowed in a scale of how loud their yelling was. As each person was presented in the line of contestants they acted in a way to present the character of their costumes. There was a woman dressed up as a king of beasts tamer, and another woman with her dressed as a lion.They acted out a scene when it was their turn on stage. The tamer attempted to tame the wild lion while the lion persistently tried to attack the tamer. As the night goes on the atmosphere changes, everyone has patently had a lot more to drink and the levels of intelligence have diminished. As I look to my left by the dance floor I see a fight between two girls, there are shoes flying, and a crowd of people quickly gathering to get in on the action. This is now becoming an atmosphere that I may not want to be in for much longer.Although the festivities are quiet entertaining and adrenaline is pumping with every move from the dance floor it is now clear that the night is almost over. As the bouncers approach the crowed they move through aggressively to break up the fight, and manner out what has happened. I watch intently to see the damages that are done its almost dingy how entertaining this has become. Once the fight has been broken up, those involved in the fight, and the bouncers all leave out of the building, the party then goes on.The DJ makes an announcement that this will be the last song and the party will soon end. As the last song comes to an end the crowd of people being to leave out the front door. Everyone is still playful and maintain their characters as they gather around their vehicles and begin to reverse the entire process. Overall the night was entertaining to say the least the costumes created an a tmosphere that was out of the normal and would most likely not have existed if it wasnt for the costume and the theme of the party. Clear and engaging introduction that clearly states a strong dissertation 14/20 While engaging and full of detail, there is no clear thesis or map. Something like, this was a great party because of the atmosphere, the costumes, and the mood would have worked. * Clearly established supporting details, in the form of observations, that support your thesis 15/20 There are lots of supporting details, but because the framework is missing, it is unclear what those details support. * Transitions and Topic Sentences 15/20Dont forget topic sentences at the start of every major point. They need to provide a transition, a connection to the thesis, and the topic/point of the separate/section. Therefore, when you start discussing atmosphere something like Another reason why the party was so much fun was the atmosphere would have worked. * A conclusion that reinforc es the focus and dominant ideas in the text 18/20 * Engaging Tone and Style5/5 * Grammar, Punctuation, and Spelling 8/10 * MLA Header and denomination 5/5 GRADE 80